How does this sound, its one paragraph, short and easy :)?

:D this is the kind of thing that i love to read. It makes you think at each individual sentence, and it flows into one thing or a whole of things. I love it. It could be an opening because it's the kind of opening that would interest me immediately. originality? well, like i said, this kind of writing makes you think of each sentence individually and therefore it can be original in every sense, while being a complete copy of something else. just my opinion.